Shadows From the Past WP

[daughter of the King]

I really don't know where this one came from. I was playing around and it just sort of...happened.

http://s924.photobucket.com/albums/ad87/daughterKing/Narnian%20graphics/wallpapers/?action=view&current=shadowsfromthepast.jpg

There's a random white line running down the right side that I have no idea where it came from, but other than that, what do you think?

[Liberty Hoffman]

ooh, it's epic! I love it! the white line doesn't ruin the picture for me at all! good job! keep up the good work!

[Shy Galadriel]

It's really good. I like. If I would make one suggestion I would say put the word "the" next to "past". Right now it seems to say, "Shadows", "From the", and "Past". While it's pretty cool, it reads like a telegram.
I just love their epic poses with the lighting and words!

[Ithilwen]

Oh, that's beautiful! I love how you can see through the text!

You know, you can get rid of that white line by using the smudge feature.


~Riella

[Lion's Emblem]

Nice wp daughter of the King. It's a fairly simple looking wp, but it has quite a visual impact. The visual layout showcases the "kings and queens of old" very nicely. Your choice of text also works well for the piece. I particularly like how it meshes in overlay with the imagery. I would suggest bringing down the white areas slightly in the text since they come off as really eye-popping against the black background- specifically on the 'm' and parts of the 'o' and 'w' on "shadows". However, the rest of the text has a superb balance between light and dark and blending within the imagery. I'm not sure why, but I do really like the dark feel to this piece. I guess it's because we don't usually see the Pevensies showcased in this manner (even though they are standing very regal and such in these images). Nice work .

[daughter of the King]

Wow. Thanks for the comments everyone!

Libby: epic, huh? I'm glad you like it!

Shy Galadriel: hm, okay, I see what you're saying. I'm not sure how I would move the words now, but I'll keep it in mind for next time.

Riella: I know, but it didn't show up until I uploaded it into Photobucket. Not sure why...

Lion's Emblem: Thank you! Now that you pointed it out, the "m" does stick out quite a bit. I'm glad you like the dark feel, I thought it might be a little too dark when I finished it.