The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

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The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby Fireberry » Sep 11, 2017 3:03 pm

Hello, Narnia Webbers! I'm not sure if this subject has been covered before ... BUT. I believe I read somewhere, that upon completion of "Magician's Nephew" and "Last Battle", Lewis expressed an intention to go back through all the previous books and create revised versions, filling in story/logic gaps and making The Narnia Chronicles more consistent and complete (perhaps making "chronological order" work better!). As you know, he did not live long enough to do this. Anyway, true story or not -- any thoughts/ideas? -- How would YOU go back and revise the previous books, to make the whole thing flow better? - (esp. in light of "Nephew" and Battle"?) Be bold!
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby Reepi » Sep 12, 2017 12:33 am

He did make some changes between the US and UK Editions when he had the opportunity to change some details in the texts. Unfortunately, the text you find in the newer editions nowadays is the one without the changes he wanted.
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby coracle » Sep 12, 2017 2:21 am

It is true that Lewis was looking at doing some revisions, but ill health and early death prevented him.
I would guess that he might have reconciled a few of the quirks of dates etc, and maybe done an official timeline (the one we have is from Mr Hooper who knew him for only a few weeks).
I don't believe that the changes made for the American editions were seen as 'improvements' but alterations for a different audience.
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby Fireberry » Sep 12, 2017 4:09 am

One revision I'd like to see might be (in LWW?), some mention of how Narnia's great "Tree of Protection" came to its end. (Surely Tumnus or the Beavers might recall the sad event in legend or song?) Also ... maybe somewhere, a brief appearance in the Professor's house, by a visiting "Miss Plummer"????
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby coracle » Sep 12, 2017 12:39 pm

Since LWW was the first book written, and many people support reading it first without reference to MN, it seems unwise for this to be mentioned in LWW. Perhaps there are places in later books for it to be discussed - just as there are references to other stories.
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby The Rose-Tree Dryad » Sep 12, 2017 3:07 pm

It's funny, because I am someone who loves thinking about how to alter a book or film to make it better, but it's the exception with Narnia! I love speculating about how they might be adapted into films, but I never find myself thinking about how to tweak the books themselves; they're almost perfect in my eyes. ;)) It's really interesting to hear that he was considering doing some revisions! I didn't know that.

Although it's one of my favorites now, I do remember not liking Prince Caspian as much as the other books when I first read them... I think that's largely due to the odd structure of the book, so that is something that I might consider changing. Usually stories that have multiple perspectives alternate back and forth more. So for better flow, maybe have the chapters alternate between Caspian's POV and the Pevensies' POV instead of the long, Caspian-centric stretch the middle of the book. Actually, next time I re-read PC, I might try reading the first eight chapters in this order:

Chapter 4: The Dwarf Tells of Prince Caspian
Chapter 1: The Island
Chapter 5: Caspian's Adventure in the Mountains
Chapter 2: The Ancient Treasure House
Chapter 6: The People that Lived in Hiding
Chapter 3: The Dwarf
Chapter 7: Old Narnia in Danger
Chapter 8: How They Left the Island

Maybe it'll be the best idea ever, or maybe it'll make my head spin. ;))
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby King_Erlian » Sep 13, 2017 1:34 am

To me, quite a few of the details in LWW jar with the rest of the books. For one thing, the Beavers come across as too human. In the other books the Talking Beasts are more like their dumb counterparts in certain ways, such as how they eat, sleep etc. Bree and Hwin, for instance, don't live in houses, wear clothes or eat their food cooked and off plates. So with the Beavers in LWW, I would lose Mrs. Beaver's sewing machine for starters, and alter the meal that they serve to the Pevensies so that while it was still edible for human children, it was more in keeping with what a couple of intelligent beavers might be able to produce (although I'm not sure how to represent this). It would also get round the problem of how potatoes, tea and the hops for Mr. Beaver's beer could grow in the frozen Narnian soil.

I would also remove the "talking down to children" that is present in LWW and not in any of the other books, such as "if I did [describe the Witch's followers], the grown-ups might not let you read this book". That made me squirm when I first read LWW when I was about 6 or 7.

Experiment House always annoyed me a bit. Lewis seemed to imagine every school as a boarding school, yet Experiment House doesn't sound or feel like a boarding school - it's more like a modern State school (which takes day pupils only). It's as if Lewis tried to imagine a modern day school, then absent-mindedly threw in a line about Eustace and Jill going to their dorms to change out of their Narnian clothes.

And yes, I would sort out the English timeline. LWW took place "long ago during the war years", and going by what the children say about how much time has passed in England between the adventures, less than four years passed between LWW and LB, yet Eustace referred to being "smashed up by Britsh Railways", and British Railways wasn't formed (when the railways were nationalised) until 1948.
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Re: The Revised CHRONICLES? - The "Polish" Lewis Never Made

Postby Stylteralmaldo » Sep 13, 2017 7:56 pm

When I saw the title of this thread I had to do a double take. Here I am thinking Lewis had some obscure addition to Narnia written in Polish. B-)
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