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I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby Lucy P. » Apr 14, 2010 7:20 pm

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_e4Gy_w75heA/S ... 00/bg1.png

^to convey Peter's emotions when he momentarily thought Lucy went under. Tell me what you think!
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Re: I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby ForeverFan » Apr 15, 2010 7:57 am

I think you did a very very good job at conveying those emotions! :) The blending of the various images is well done, and I like the black and white with the colour in the background. My only CC is that to the extreme right of the piece there's something that looks kind of odd- I think it's one of the beavers? Anyway, it just looks a little bit out of place there, might it not be possible to cut it out entirely? Or was it there for a purpose and I'm interpreting it wrong? :ymblushing: ;))
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Re: I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby Narnia Girl » Apr 15, 2010 8:44 am

Wow, I think you did a great job conveying his emotions! I love the picture of Lucy that you used, she looks so small and vulnerable and sweet. I really like it! Good job! *saves*
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Re: I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby wolfloversk » Apr 15, 2010 6:34 pm

Oooo... that's awesome. I really like that scene, because it shows how close Peter is to Lucy. I think you conveyed his emotions really well (*) (*) (*) (*)
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Re: I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby Lady Courage » Apr 15, 2010 7:28 pm

Oh I LOVE it! Gorgeous! Too bad you didn't make it widescreen. :p Captured the emotion very well! And I totally adore Peter's bond to Lucy.
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Re: I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby Lion's Emblem » Apr 15, 2010 9:21 pm

Nice wp Lucy P., I really like the concept behind this one. Your choices of imagery are great for the concept of the piece, there's defintiely the emotional connection made. I personally am not too fond of the foreground image of Peter included in the piece, I just like the connection between the colored image of Peter with the greyscale image of Lucy, but its totally a subjective thing. On that note, the effect between the colored imagery paired with the greyscale imagery works really well on the visual level. Blending of imagery is superb throughout. Text works perfectly with your choice of imagery: in concept, layout, and coloration. Nice work :ymapplause: .
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Re: I Can't Lose You (LWW WP)

Postby Shy Galadriel » Apr 16, 2010 10:36 am

Wow... that's really touching... it almost reconciles me with the waterfall scene just to get this wallpaper.
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