What Happened Here? (PC WP)

[Lucy P.]

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^I've tried to convey the confusion the Pevensies felt upon discovering ruined Paravel.
Tell me what you think!

[HM Swanwhite]

That is an excellent WP. You have captured it perfectly - I love the separation of the three pics and they black and white/colour design. The text is perfect and I love how you made some of it blurry to go with what you're saying. Lovely font and I like how you made the last line stand out. Lovely colouring too and choice of pictures. I also just noticed and like how you made the black and white pictures kind of hazy.

Excellent job!!! This is a fantastic and well-thought out wallpaper that portrays their confusion perfectly. Love it.

[greenbird37]

It totally captures the emotion they felt and you did them absolutely perfectly...wonderful job!

[Narnia Girl]

It totally captures the emotion...I love the pic you used, I can just see all the confusion on the expression on Ed's face. The text fits perfectly, and I think the section that was black and white turned out perfect too! Great job! I always enjoy your WPs. *saves*

Oh, and btw, I really like your avie and sig as well! The coloring is cool.

[LadyGrace]

Oh cool! That is so cool! I like the way you did the text Where did you get those pictures? I really like em!

[Lion's Emblem]

Great wp Lucy P. Overall design and layout look good. I like the idea of using a setup of a three tier imagery layout. Though, it might be nice to see a bit more "overhang" in the bottom image as opposed to the top. I say this because, in the case of matting, it's usually more visually pleasing to see a bit more of border at the bottom of the piece than more at the top. In this case, there seems to be more of the imagery (in cropping) up top so it becomes 'top heavy'. Perhaps if there was a black border line at the bottom as well as the top or a slightly different cropping choice (I know, everyone has their own preferences). It's also looks great having the main center image be in color with the top and bottom images in greyscale. I don't know if it was intentional or not, but the two greyscale images seem to have a bit of a haze or bluriness to them, which works out superbly with the concept of the piece.
Your choice of concept for the piece is great and you have chosen perfect imagery to match. Text also works well in matchup to the imagery: conceptually, in font choice, layout, and coloration. It might be nice to see another deisgn element to the text to match the effect on "it's just not clear". Maybe it's a bit cliche, but I feel like the word "haze" should have a blurred effect to it, as a conceptual idea as well as to lead into the next phrase.
A conceptually strong and visually appealing piece. Nice work .

[narnia_lover127]

Very nice!! i think you really captured their confusion about what had happened. Love the black and white pictures on top and bottom with the middle in color. REally great job!!

Also, i love your avvie and sig!

[Lady Courage]

Oh wow! Love the composition, colors, and pictures. And now that I have a widescreen wallpaper, I can't really use it. lol Too bad! Very nice! Totally captures the emotions they were feeling.