What a lovely face for Lucy! The eyes are very beautiful and real-looking, and somehow you have succeeded in making the hair also look real, something that I never get quite right. Good shading, especially around the mouth. The eye on the right could be a tiny bit farther from the nose, just a millimetre or so, but it's fine also in it's current position. Did you use Georgie Henley as reference? For some reason I can't tell
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Excellent work with Peter's nose, as well as with the shading of the drawing. The eyes and lips are good, too. Peter looks so much like Moseley in this so there's no need to ask if you used him as a reference
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